Campus Shooting

Thesis Statement:Campus shooting has become one of the most serious problems in the US, which resulted from several reasons :( 1) abnormal psychological condition of all the teen killers. (2) The violence influence from the media and the Internet. (3) There is not a good measure to help these abnormal persons.

Topic Sentence 1: Abnormal psychological condition of their inner world is the primary basement of killing others.
Support Evidence:
1. In March, 21st in Minnesota, the 16 years’ old boy who shot 16 people made 9 of them died thought himself as a born Nazi.
2. In April, 16th in Virginia, the Korean student who killed 32 people was shown his cruelty in the tape he sent, also according to some students and teachers in the university, they thought him unsociable and eccentric.

Topic Sentence 2: The violence show on the TV, the violence game and website in the Internet are also a reason lead the shooting happened.
Support Evidence
1. In 1999, a horrible campus shooting happened in Columbine High School in Colorado, two students, Eric Harris and Dylan Klebond killed 13 people including 1 teacher. After the shooting, a research agency Simon Wiesenthal Center find that they have played a violence game “ Doom”, a very famous FPS ( First-person shooter), and what they dressed, a raincoat, was just like the heroes in the game.
2. Some killers also were found tracks of surfing some violence websites.

Topic Sentence 3: At last, the society doesn’t have a good measure to help those students.
Support Evidence:
1. Back to the shooting in Virginal, teachers and students had realized that the killer was in bad psychological condition, but no one turns out to help him, even the university agency.
2. For other killers, there should be some ways to help them, because their anger or abnormal situation all cumulative in their heart, there should be some way to observe and help.